We+Are+More+Paragraph

We Are More : We are Canadian we are a tree that is still growing. We have had many acomplishments from the stanley cup to the grey cup from steve nash to wyane gretzkey. Prodigies in the making we are building future for the ones after us the poem that shayne koyzca made to be candian has inspired many people to go far canada is what we live canada is what we have made we live Canadian. We dont ride polar bears to school and live in igloos we are not those stereotypes. We are more then people take us as we have built a legacy for every Canadian from now till the end from Vancouver to P.E.I We are More!.

ALthough interesting and full of ideas, this is NOT a paragraph Sean. This is one long run-on sentence. Be sure to answer the question. Use examples from the poem to support your writing.

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